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To what extent is a stable family vital for a successful society? by Mind Map: To what extent is a stable family vital for a successful society?
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To what extent is a stable family vital for a successful society?

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In an overview, families can be seen as the fundamental building blocks of a society. A stable family is one where every family member can coexist harmoniously, and each family member is given care, love and support. Hence for a society to be successful, which is where there is a certain level of security and people can constantly progress forward socially and economically, stable families are imperative so as to provide a certain level of foundation mandatory for the establishment of such a society. Therefore I do concur that a stable family is indeed vital for a successful society.

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Thus, it can be seen that a stable family has a large role in creating a successful society, since the family is the first social group that any individual would be in contact with. The family thus plays the role of the educator, imparting the correct values and with proper upbringing, and also the role of the provider, providing each member with care and concern, and also materialistically, with education. Although a stable family is not always the largest factor in creating a successful society, and some dysfunctional families can provide motivation to others to not follow suit, a stable family can be considered as playing a vital role in a successful society due to it being able to provide the basics that each individual needs to progress. Therefore, I agree that a stable family is vital in a successful society.

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All your supporting points are similar in that that all talk about how a stable family can positively impact the children and thus result in a successful society. What about the adults? No emphasis placed there.

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In essence, a repeat of supporting point 1

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Generally a good point, but rework your topic sentence and add in more concrete examples.

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All in all, argument is rather limited due to the repeated supporting points. The intro and conclusion are written well, but there has to be more discussion on why stable families are so important to ensure a successful society. Topic sentences are not focused on answering the question too.