1. ideas
1.1. The story starts when your protagonist spies on someone. Another character is a scientist who doesn't like animals.
1.2. start with the bad guy
1.3. REF-ID vaccination campaign
1.3.1. guy is by the doctor for a flu vaccination shot
1.3.2. actually gets a REFID injection without knowing it
1.3.3. hurts a little
1.3.4. leaves the doctor for a date
1.4. in the past:
1.4.1. what
1.4.1.1. the bad guy and the nice guy were working together in the same lab
1.4.1.2. they were have having a good time
1.4.1.3. they were inventing this RFID device
1.4.1.4. there was also a girl in the lab
1.4.1.5. she was with the bad guy
1.4.1.6. the bad guy made the REFID a commercial success
1.4.1.7. the good guy drifted away
1.4.1.8. the girl as well
1.4.2. how
1.4.2.1. film with an iPhone?
1.5. later in the past
1.5.1. the girl and the good guy started bonding
1.5.2. the RFID device dramatically reduced crime in the city
1.5.2.1. in the ocuntry
1.5.2.2. in the continent
1.5.2.3. in the world
1.5.2.4. police is able to detect bad behavior and neutralize suspect
1.5.2.5. no crime happens - nobody goes to jail
1.5.2.6. behaviors change
1.6. From an iPad, someone follows everyone on his screen (little colored dots)
1.6.1. color of the dot is different based on the behavior of the person
1.6.2. when the iPad guy(s?) touches one of the dots, the person falls
1.6.3. sometimes the guy strikes through several dots and several person fall on the floor
1.6.4. film a square with many people falling with no reason
1.6.5. people waiting in line, falling one by one progressively, closer and closer to a couple
1.6.6. the man keep tapping on dots
1.6.7. the line stops falling
1.6.8. the couple is saved
1.6.9. actually the iPad guy decided to stop and watch the dots move faster
1.6.10. everybody is running
1.6.11. the guy is back on his iPad tapping dots
1.7. Make a parallel with the villain already acting badly as a child (torturing a little animal ? )
1.8. The villain walks in the streets and enters a square with many people. People fall unconscious when he walks by. The man is after the hero
1.8.1. le méchant agit sur les gens à l'aide de la télécommande qu'il a fabriquée, qui est connectée directement dans sa main/son bras
1.8.2. (ou dans un gd magasin ou un parc au lieu d'un square?
1.8.3. pour les gens qui tombent prévoir quelques objets qui continuent à être en mouvement parmis les gens inanimés
1.9. The villain's trick has not effect on the hero
1.10. The hero has done something that makes the control device ineffective on him
1.10.1. a simple trick actually
1.10.1.1. électro aimant?
1.10.1.2. micro onde