I rarely get messages via LinkedIn that I pay attention to. This one did, and actually got me to the exploratory call stage. I\'m sharing it below, with his permission.

[You\'ll sometimes see comments in brackets - that\'s my notes for you.]

From: Gordon Montgomery

Subject: Hello

[I would prefer something more descriptive, e.g. get to know each other?]

Message:

Hi George,

I’m excited to connect with you because we are both members of the “Friends of B Corporation Group “and I have a special invitation for you.

[It\'s a LinkedIn group -- and it\'s a great idea: if you\'re part of Linkedin Groups with kindred spirits / people you share values with, you might want to reach out to them like this. Most LinkedIn members have their default setting set to allow messages from other LinkedIn group members.]

Through my two decades of experience I have noticed something interesting. Either executives are achieving amazing levels of success and are looking for something to give them the edge on the competition or they are completely miserable and are looking for something to change.

[Replace the above paragraph with what you\'ve noticed about your ideal clients.]

If this sounds familiar to you or is an issue for someone you know, please read on.

[Replace below paragraph with your brief Credibility Indicators.]

Executives from companies such as AT&T, Dell, Harvard, HSBC, Microsoft, Texaco, Proctor & Gamble, and Staples have trusted me to enable executives to reach their peak performance and help co-create a culture wrapped around excellence.

My coaching program is only for those who are willing to take the big steps required to ensure that they are always ahead of the curve, and not behind it. This program requires 110% commitment and is not for those who are on the fence about their personal growth.

If this speaks to you, read on.

Because you’re part of my network, I’m offering you a special deal to discuss your situation and goals in a complimentary and confidential strategy session. You will walk away with new “aha’s” and at least one actionable idea. We’ll explore a clear road map that will make your future an extraordinary, successful adventure. From there we’ll determine if a customized coaching program makes sense.

I schedule only 3 of these strategy sessions a week, so if you think this program is for you, message me now.

I look forward to speaking with you soon.

- Gordon Montgomery

www.linkedin.com/in/gordon

[If you\'ve gotten other effective outreach messages that got you to an exploratory call, let me know!]

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