1. Point 1
1.1. Joe's Point
1.1.1. Cause: The Alliance System
1.1.2. Effect: Development in peaceful organisations promoting trade such as NATO, the UN and the EU
1.1.3. Main Point: The Alliance System, as a cause of WW1, must protect the nation by participating in these alliance, thus protecting NZ's resources, economy + trade markets.
1.1.4. Mistakes
1.1.4.1. Contradicts point of promoting alliances developing a string farming economy, yet promotes conscription + thus John will not be present to reap $ rewards from a successful farm.
1.1.4.2. Hyperbole on current alliances on being better than they are - could have used better examples to get his point across rather than listing them
1.1.4.3. Contradicting view that alliances are negative - war was inevitable either way
1.1.5. Disproving 1st point using opposing Argument
1.1.5.1. Cause: Alliance Systems
1.1.5.2. Effects: Alliances are formed to promote + drive power acquisition. - Moroccan crisis - France seeks to occupy morocco in order to strengthen its power in North Africa which is resource rich
1.1.5.3. Alliances are gangs- manipulating small players to get what they want together
1.2. My Point
1.2.1. Cause: The Alliance System
1.2.2. Effect:
1.2.3. Main Point: That the Alliance System, as a cause of WW1&2, helped develop a group of organisations that positively benefit society.
1.2.4. Disproving 1st point using opposing argument
2. Point 2
2.1. My Point
2.1.1. Cause: Militarism
2.1.2. Disproving 1st point using opposing arguement
2.1.3. Effect:
3. Key Question
3.1. Last Year
3.1.1. How could the four causes and effects of war persuade John Potts to either enlist or become a conscientious objector?
3.2. This Year
3.2.1. Use the causes and effects of two wars in order to write a letter that persuades a panel of war veterans and pacifists that war is either justifiable or unacceptable.
4. The Audience
4.1. Last Year
4.1.1. John Potts
4.1.2. Joe's piece uses Logos and Ethos more than Pathos, in order most likely to look like he was learned and experienced (University Professor)
4.1.3. Dimitri's piece uses Pathos more than Logos and Ethos in order to appeal to the humanitarian side of the audience (Good Mate)
4.2. This Year
4.2.1. The 3 pacifists and 3 veterans
4.2.2. Use of Pathos/Logos/Ethos has to justify your opinion and