Brown Group: Brochure
by damien rogers
1. Draft update 1
1.1. Made some changes to the cover.pub
1.2. Geckos looks good, I just changed size from A3 to A4. Also just need to check the in text referencing
2. Rough draft
2.1. Text outline of brochure
2.1.1. Intro
2.1.1.1. What is nanotechnology and basic example
2.1.1.2. What is Biomimicry
2.1.1.3. How do we link biomimicry and nanotechnology
2.1.2. Body with examples
2.1.3. conclusion
2.2. Correct size format into A4 if using publisher
3. Team guidelines document, attach your name if you agree.
3.1. Jason
4. References
5. 23rd apr
5.1. Have emailed group with update
5.2. Damien to start conclusion
5.3. Jack to review
5.4. Jason and Jordan to work on body
5.5. Jordan can I get you to check the referencing for gecko/lotus and update *pub files attached to "23rd apr" (lotus doesn't have any in text or image referencing) Thanks
6. I reworded the Cover, Gecko and shark. I didnt reword the butterfly or lotus effect if you have used them. I will add references next
7. Final Drapht 1
8. Drapht 1 for the Brochure. I need to add references then i will go through and make a first edit. If we can add a Conclusion Page and then all do an edit each.
9. Last day 25th
9.1. Damien, working on conclusion, post to MM or email, I can convert
9.2. Jack, Please review final before submition, will email to you approx 4pm Perth time
9.3. Looking to submit approx 6pm Perth time, I cant submit after this time due to prior commitments, JH
9.4. Jack can I get you to do a quick check list and post to MM as previously discussed
9.5. Jordan, like the new formatting you have done, but the big ticket item will be referencing so we dont get done for plagiarism. In text/end text/images
9.6. Jordan the wording you had in the previous version of lotus was very comprehensive and well written, can we go with that version
9.7. Let me know if anyone is having problems and needs a hand, I'll be at work tomorrow and have my phone close by 0435729646 (6am-6pm) JH
9.8. PDF version "Final Draft 1"
9.9. If any one can see gaps/changes/input that is necessary, post to MM under Changes Required
10. feedback on brochure and MM site - attached. Mary I dont have peer feedback yet as I am waiting on the group to complete it.
11. Peer review. Averaged out our grading. If we can just include our comments it will make our feedback more useful Include your name if you are ok with the averaged peer grading we are giving.
11.1. Jordan
12. Research Phase
12.1. Teleconference
12.2. jason 0435729646
13. Hi all I just hopped on to give you some feedback on your brochure. If you want feedback on your draft can you please post it asap and send me an email letting me know that you have posted it. Mary
14. Hi Jason and Jordan please provide your contact details so as to arrange a group phone conversation.
15. jordan 61 439 650 024
16. Hi Jordan, please send me what you have in a word document as I am working on the conclusion. I do not have the software to read on PUB. I will work on this and have it back by 2pm EST. I will send back and it can be uploaded onto PUB. I will also do a review of content and grammar. Please send to my ECU account [email protected]
17. Review
17.1. Cover
17.2. lotus
17.3. Shark
17.4. Gecko
17.5. Conclusion
17.6. reference
18. Adding the references in now for pictures and text in Lotus, Shark, and gecko. Unfortunately the old lotus version was copy pasted and the new one is was rewritten.
19. Submit
19.1. Jordan
19.2. Jason
19.3. Jack
19.4. damian
20. Digital receipt for submition