Comparison
by Truong Quoc Minh
1. Reason 1
1.1. Evidence :According to Angela Intergenerational Poverty: Inequality often perpetuates itself across generations, as children from low-income families face barriers to upward mobility. (Angela, N.D.)
1.1.1. This consequences have the impact on the poverty .
2. Comparitive Phrase
2.1. The Consequences of Unequal distribution of income is far more intense to debate then the causes of it .
3. Explaination
3.1. Explaination : Poor families often stays poor for many years and this will affect the ability for children to be success .
4. Consequences (Reuslt of Something )
4.1. Why do i prefer consequences over causes ?
4.1.1. When i talk about an issue , i would wanted to see what will it brought to us , what will it affect our life .
4.1.2. When we look at the consequences we would be more alerted more than looking at the causes .
5. The most important consequences
5.1. Poverty continues from family to family when poverty occur , their children get affected too , because they have very less chance to improve their life .
6. Superlative Phrase
6.1. The most significant consequences of this issue is poverty continues from family to family .
7. Explaination
7.1. Income inequality have a closer connection with crime and between 1968 and 2000 societies have higher crime rates because of economically unequal .
8. Reason 2
8.1. Evidence: Studies establish a positive relationship between income inequality and crime. According to a survey of research conducted between 1968 and 2000, most researchers point to evidence economically unequal societies have higher crime rates.
8.1.1. The consequences have a effect on the crime rates .