Feedback from 'The Nameless' first cut
저자: Abbie Rawlins
1. Differentiate between flashbacks, for instance change the colour between them
2. Need to hear her scream, silent scream don't work, you want a reaction from the audience
3. Need to be further away when covering/capturing her at the end
4. Re-film throwing cable ties- cant tell what they are and need too to understand that shes been tied up
5. Audience confused, need to add something to make more sense
6. Re-film head shots where her heads cut off the top
7. Research into opening credits
8. Some shots are too long
9. Show her actually escaping to make more sense