Second Cut Teacher Feedback

1. At some moments Amee looks like she is pretending to be in a music video rather than appear to be the star.

2. Lip-syncing is mostly excellent

3. Some moments Amee looks at the camera with no movement, meaning that the music video loses some of it's momentum.

4. One of the Lip-synching shots is out of sync.

5. One of the whiteboard shots Amee looks at the sun glasses but doesn't put them on. This shot either needs to be cut or removed.

6. The multiple use of locations is good. It doesn't look the artist is just in one place.

7. Getting Better

8. A few shots need to go in to help fill in the gaps

9. The spray can effect needs to be carried out otherwise it will need to be removed

10. Some of the editing cuts is too quick.

11. One of the dance poses Amee is not fully committing to. This therefore needs to be removed or re shot.

12. Likes the use of the colour grenade.