Analytical essay

1. Second paragraph

1.1. How the author expresses his arguments?

1.1.1. disadvantages

1.1.1.1. Tone

1.1.1.1.1. Disturbing

1.1.1.2. how express credibility

1.1.1.2.1. statistics

2. Third paragraph

2.1. How the author expresses his arguments?

2.1.1. advantages

2.1.1.1. Tone

2.1.1.1.1. optimistic

2.1.1.2. how express credibility

2.1.1.2.1. authors agree with the same idea.

3. Conclussion

3.1. the author achieves his purpose

3.2. brief summary of the body paragraph

4. Thesis statement

4.1. The addiction to technology has triggered mental disorders in teenagers, because of the excessive time invested, lack of sleep, and rejection by society.

5. First paragraph

5.1. Summary

5.1.1. First idea:

5.1.1.1. excessive time invested

5.1.1.1.1. essential part of their life

5.1.2. Second idea:

5.1.2.1. deprives teenager’s sleep

5.1.2.1.1. The light of these devices promotes its excessive use at night

5.1.3. Third idea:

5.1.3.1. other people discriminate or bullied them.

5.1.3.1.1. they have a low self-esteem, so teens get depressed and commit suicide.