The year of dressing formally

1. Turn

1.1. The major turn for him was realizing he doesn't want to be fashion-less forever.

2. Organization

2.1. It's starts off explaining his bad fashion, then it goes on to tell the different articles he read to change his fashion sense and begin to dress better.

3. Thesis

3.1. That you should dress for success.

3.1.1. When he dressed better students treated him with more respect.

3.1.2. He felt better abut himself when he started to dress more formally.

3.1.3. He learned more about fashion in general.

3.1.4. Mentioned losing weight so that's a reason to make you want to dress better.

4. Main Points

4.1. He thinks professors should dress more professional.

4.2. Having signature clothes that will last for years to come.