pitch feedback

1. pros

1.1. well detailed presentation

1.2. great concept

1.3. detailed risk assessment

1.4. clear inspiration from other artists and videos

1.5. in depth audience research

1.6. detaied artist research

2. cons

2.1. fix production schedule

2.2. idea behind video is confusing

2.3. make the base track ideas clearer

2.4. use different production methods

2.5. make audience research clearer

2.6. add more to risk assessment about members of the group

2.7. clear up whether or not you are going to include a party scene

2.8. are you going to include subtitles?