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Examine the claim that family always suffers when women go to work. by Mind Map: Examine the claim that family always suffers when women go to work.
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Examine the claim that family always suffers when women go to work.

In the long run, in a situation where moms are career orientated and failed to spend enough time with their children, it can have an adverse effect on the child's intellectual, social and emotional developement. this is because their children would not have their parents to guide them as they grow and develop. (edited)

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However ,It is understandable for women to take on a job in such high cost of living society to support the family too.Yet again, They can keep sufferings of family low when they go to work through prudent management in allocating their time.

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If working mothers are too caught up by climbing the corporate ladder and fail to effectively strike a balance between their worklife and familylife, the repercussions faced may be severe.

If these problems are not solved, couples may drift apart as they have little time for each other because of work and the family may drift apart ,resulting in the situation whereby family members have too little time for each other that they have very little communication. (edited)

without a mother functioning her role in the family, it may cause the family to feel detached and lack togetherness as they are those who would help to nuture their child if not the father. Once the distance feeling sets in, it may be rather difficult to achieve family togetherness again. (edited)

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Therefore,i argee that family does suffer to a certain extent when women go to work .This is through without a mom performing her basic lead in the family,it will affect the family ultimately in various aspects-child rearing 's effectiveness and family bonds.

Overall feedback: - label each argument with the names of the member(s) in charge - check for spelling and grammatical errors - e.g. "women is", use "mothers" instead of "moms" - some arguments are based heavily on gender stereotypes and assumptions - e.g women are in charge of household chores