Composition 2

1. When my parents heard the news, they felt very proud of us. They told us that they will bring us to River Safari to see the animals there.When we heard that,we let out a cry of joy.

1.1. Conclusion

2. Setting

2.1. My house

2.1.1. At night

3. Characters

3.1. Me

3.2. Zach( my younger brother)

3.3. Zeph(my older brother)

3.4. burgler

4. Plot

4.1. My parents went for wedding dinner

4.2. My two brothers and I were left at home

4.3. I pulled my blanket over me,trying to sleep

5. Events

5.1. As I was about to fall sleep,I heard a loud crash

5.2. I took my toy wooden rolling pin and opened my room door slowly

5.3. I went to check on my brothers.

5.4. Zach was armed with a baseball bat,while Zeph was armed with a metal bar

6. Solution

6.1. We went behind the burgler who was ramaging through the drawers

6.2. We swung our weapons hard on the burgler's head,causing him to faint

6.3. I called the police immediately

6.4. Soon the police arrived. My parents also came back

6.5. When my parents saw the police cars, they asked me what happend

6.6. I immediately answered them