1. INTRO
1.1. HOOK
1.1.1. Erase this and write your hook
1.2. LEAD-IN
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1.3. THESIS STATEMENT AND MAP POINTS
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2. MAP POINT 1: Economic reasons (Luciana)
2.1. SUPPORTING SENTENCES: Erase the ideas and turn them into sentences.
2.1.1. Expensive books and fees
2.1.2. Food and lodge
2.1.3. Transport
2.2. CONCLUDING SENTENCES
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2.3. INTRODUCTORY SENTENCES
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2.3.1.1. First, one of the biggest reasons that students drop out colleague is because of the lack of money to continue. Between the expensive books and fees and just trying to survive, students find it more difficult to make ends meet.
3. MAP POINT 2: Vocational reasons (Debora)
3.1. INTRODUCTORY SENTENCES
3.1.1. Second, an effect of college dropouts could be vocational reasons.
3.2. SUPPORTING SENTENCES
3.2.1. Most of the students dropout college because they feel frustrated with the career they choose.
3.2.1.1. Some/ Most/ In some cases, students were forced by their parents to follow a course of studies and because of that, they feel unmotivated to keep on studying.
3.2.2. New job
3.3. CONCLUDING SENTENCES
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4. MAP POINT 3: Social reasons
4.1. INTRODUCTORY SENTENCES
4.1.1. Last but not least, there are social reasons why college students drop out.
4.2. SUPPORTING SENTENCES
4.2.1. In some cases, / Sometimes university students have to deal with bullying and violence between classmates and different kinds or groups.
4.2.2. Apart of that, sexual elections, origin, color or even economic status are the common reasons why college students feel discriminated. Due to that fact, students tend to decide to leave.
4.2.2.1. Social anxiety (shyness, lack of confidence etc.)
4.3. CONCLUDING SENTENCES
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5. CONCLUSION
5.1. SIGNAL OF THE LAST PARAGRAPH OF THE ESSAY
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5.2. RESTATEMENT OF THE THESIS STATEMENT
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5.3. FINAL REFLECTION OR REMARKS
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