Not Waving But Drowning by Stevie Smith Research
par Aesha Alessandra Balut
1. Things To Note:
1.1. There's a theme of miscommunication or misinterpretation
1.2. Could be an allegory for mental illness
1.3. No clear speaker - switches around from time to time
1.3.1. Lines 1-2 and 7: unknown speaker who sets the poem up (perhaps judgemental of the dead man)
1.3.2. Lines 3-4 and 11-12: The dead man, uses "I"
1.3.3. Stanza 2 - Could be the same speaker in Line 1, more sympathetic towards the man
2. Form And Structure
2.1. Stanza One and Three uses half rhymes - "moaning" and "drowning"
2.2. 12 lines, divided into three stanzas
2.3. Has a rhyme scheme of ABCB
3. Poetic Devices
3.1. Alliteration
3.1.1. "Nobody heard him"
3.1.2. "Loved larking"
3.1.3. "Him his heart"
3.2. Caesura - A stop or pause in a line
3.2.1. "Poor chap, he always loved larking"
3.3. Consonance
3.3.1. "Waving but drowning" (ng)
3.3.2. "Nobody heard him" (d)
3.4. Enjambment
3.4.1. "I was much too far out // and not waving but drowning"
3.5. Epizeuxis - Quick repetition of word(s) to draw emotions
3.5.1. "Oh, no no no"