1. Student
1.1. Andy
1.1.1. Intro
1.1.2. Overview
1.1.3. Details 1
1.1.4. Details 2
1.2. Simon
1.2.1. Intro
1.2.2. Overview
1.2.3. Details 1
1.2.4. Details 2
1.3. Lai Phuong Thao
1.3.1. Intro
1.3.1.1. The bar chart displays the amount of time spent by people living in the UK on three different kinds of phone call during the 7- year period between 1995 and 2002.
1.3.1.1.1. ok
1.3.2. Overview
1.3.2.1. It can be observed that the local fixed line was the most popular type throughout the year shown. Also, national and international fixed line and mobiles (all calls) remain the second and the third trend respectively. However, the number of time spent on those two categories both increase, with the significant rise in mobile calls.
1.3.2.1.1. years
1.3.2.1.2. copy simon
1.3.2.1.3. too long overview
1.3.2.1.4. you can say its popular (like Simon), or "dominant"
1.3.2.1.5. not a phrase: "second and third trend"
1.3.3. Details 1
1.3.3.1. In 1975, Britains used local fixed lines in over 70 billion minutes, more than double the amount of time spent on international fixed lines while just nearly 4 billion minutes were made via mobile calls.
1.3.3.1.1. _in_ minutes?
1.3.3.1.2. All types of phone call saw a gradual increase in time usage over the following 4 years.
1.3.3.1.3. too long
1.3.3.2. In 1999, minutes spent on local fixed lines reached a peak at 90 billion, but it consistently declined over a period of 4 years from 1999 to 2002. In contrast, the figure for international lines made a steady growth, at 60 billion minutes in 2000. Likewise, the duration of mobile calls climbed dramatically to a new high, about 45 billion minutes usage.
1.3.3.2.1. categorization
1.4. Details 2
1.5. Diệu Linh trưởng
1.5.1. Intro
1.5.1.1. The bar chart displays the amount of time of people in the UK used three different types of phone call: local, fixed line; national or international, fixed line and mobiles from 1995 to 2002.
1.5.1.1.1. people
1.5.2. Overview
1.5.2.1. Compared three categories phone calls, local, fixed lines were clearly into a noticeable position during the period shown. Mobile calls took account of the lowest figures; however, this sort witnessed the most tremendous growth.
1.5.2.1.1. compared?
1.5.2.1.2. clearly into a noticeable position?
1.5.2.1.3. not take account of, this is the same mistake from the last lesson
1.5.2.1.4. this sort
1.5.2.2. "bit" is spoken language
1.5.3. Details 1
1.5.3.1. In 1995,a little bit over 70 billion minutes was spent on local, fixed lines, and about half of that figure on national or international calls. On the contrary, mobile phones were used for only almost 4 billion minutes. Throughout the 4-year-following period, the amount of time for all three kinds of phone call rose steadily.
1.5.3.1.1. minutes - WAS spent?
1.5.3.1.2. "for only almost" is not quite clean
1.5.3.1.3. the following 4-year period
1.5.4. Details 2
1.5.4.1. By 1999, the number of minutes of local landlines had reached a peak at 90 billion but reduced during the after period, while the others types of phone call continued increasing. In 2002, the amount of time of national or international landline calls pass 60 billion minutes, whereas the rise to nearly 45 billion minutes was for mobiles.
1.5.4.1.1. not a phrase: "reduced during the after period" -
1.5.4.1.2. continued to increase
1.5.4.1.3. passed
1.6. Linh Thảo
1.6.1. Intro
1.6.1.1. The bar chart compares the total amount of time spent on telephone calls in the UK, which is categorized in 3 different groups from 1995 to 2000.
1.6.1.1.1. 2002
1.6.2. Overview
1.6.2.1. Overall, it is obvious that calls made by local-fixed line were the most used while the use of mobiles was the lowest.
1.6.2.1.1. However, mobile calls witnessed a remarkable increase throughout the whole period.
1.6.2.1.2. obvious would show some kind of attitude here
1.6.2.1.3. not local-fixed line, you should say local/fixed line or local, fixed line
1.6.3. Details 1
1.6.3.1. In 1995, local calls accounted for the biggest proportion, which was over 70%, whereas the figures for National and International calls and mobile calls were approximately 40% and 5% respectively.
1.6.3.1.1. don't use proportion in a bar chart, you don't have to
1.6.4. Details 2
1.6.4.1. In 1999, the amount of time spent on local calls reached a peak at 90%, however, this figure declined to only 70% over the period of 4 years.
1.6.4.1.1. In contrast, there was an upward trend in the use of both National and International-fixed line and mobiles, which increased consistently to 60% and 45% respectively.
2. The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
2.1. Andy
2.1.1. Intro
2.1.2. Overview
2.1.3. Details 1
2.1.4. Details 2
2.2. Simon
2.2.1. Intro
2.2.1.1. The bar chart compares the amount of time spent by people in the UK on three different types of phone call between 1995 and 2002.
2.2.2. Overview
2.2.2.1. It is clear that calls made via local, fixed lines were the most popular type, in terms of overall usage, throughout the period shown.
2.2.2.1.1. The lowest figures on the chart are for mobile calls, but this category also saw the most dramatic increase in user minutes.
2.2.3. Details 1
2.2.3.1. In 1995, people in the UK used fixed lines for a total of just over 70 billion minutes for local calls, and about half of that amount of time for national or international calls. By contrast, mobile phones were only used for around 4 billion minutes. Over the following four years, the figures for all three types of phone call increased steadily.
2.2.3.1.1. By contrast
2.2.4. Details 2
2.2.4.1. By 1999, the amount of time spent on local calls using landlines had reached a peak at 90 billion minutes. Subsequently, the figure for this category fell, but the rise in the other two types of phone call continued. In 2002, the number of minutes of national / international landline calls passed 60 billion, while the figure for mobiles rose to around 45 billion minutes.
2.2.4.1.1. Subsequently