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GarageStory_V4 により Mind Map: GarageStory_V4

1. Scene_Sequence

1.1. [Scene_1] 3 min Trinidad, Humbolt County, CA

1.1.1. Beach Early AM - - - [Suk_Bong] walking on sand - - - passes by the boat moored by the shore

1.1.1.1. [Cottage] by the beach - - - [Suk_Bong] peeks in - - - [Quetzal] painting [Liliana] nude [Grand Odalisque]

1.1.1.1.1. Camera pans showing the room - - - Camera stops at a table showing a Laptop & a cellphone

1.2. [Scene_2] 5 min Cafe

1.2.1. Camera zooms in on the CherryPink cellphone of [Jesus] sitting at a table

1.2.1.1. [Suk_Bong] sits across from [Jesus] & trys to make a phone call, but his cells phone breaks down; he curses

1.2.1.1.1. [Jesus] slides his cellphone across the table; [Suk_Bong] makes a phone call (in Korean to his mom, [Kim Young Ae], that he arrived in US fine) & returns it to [Jesus]' hand

1.3. [Scene_3] 5 min Hotel [Sculptors Conference]

1.3.1. [Max] sitting at a table alone; several tables shown with other sculptors

1.3.1.1. [Max] meets [Suk_Bong]

1.3.1.1.1. [Max} & [Suk_Bong] meet [Emil]

1.4. [Scene_4] 5 min Redwood Forest

1.4.1. 3 Sculptors walk together: [Max] [Suk_Bong] [Emil] - - - Some scenes have not been altered & this is one of them

1.4.1.1. Elephanta Caves Trimurti {Visitor's View} [Brahma]: Right (W) [Vishnu]: Ctr [Shiva]: Left (E) - - - Sculpture faces: N (Entrance) Visitor faces: S (Sculpture) - - - {Slightly confusing...} {To me, extremely confusing...}

1.4.1.1.1. The distinctive protruding lower lip feature is readily discernible from the photo of my Dutch-Indonesian friend's photo from his youth: [Rich Vermeesch]

1.5. [Scene_5] 5 min Garage

1.5.1. A chunk of rock is near the door of a humongous garage encircled by scaffolding that is connected to a house where the owner [Chap] & his wife [Sylvia] live

1.5.1.1. Contrary to the real Elephanta Caves, the [Garage] has South entrance & the back of Trimurti is on the South direction (same as real Elephanta Caves) & 3 computer desks are lined up against the North wall toward which direction Trimurti faces (correct direction): {Standing in front of Trimurti facing Trimurti} Left/East/Shiva/Max Center/Vishnu/Emil Right/West/Brahma/Suk_Bong - - - The door to the kitchen is on the left (East) & action takes place between the Trimurti & the 3 computer desks

1.5.1.1.1. [Emil] enters the garage with [Quetzal] (with guitar) & comes around the Trimurti from the right side & introduces [Quetzal] to [Max] (ground left side) & [Max] shows [Quetzal] his desk - - - [Suk_Bong] was working on the top right side from where he climbs down to shake hand with [Quetzal]

1.6. [Scene_6] 10 min Garage

1.6.1. Repeat the chiseling sound by 2 sculptors; [Max] (on the floor level) & [Emil] (mid level on the scaffoling); [Suk_Bong] is not visible; camera is shooting from the back of the garage

1.6.1.1. [Quetzal] with guitar enters with [Funkman] with 2 keyboards slung over his shoulders

1.6.1.1.1. Camera zooms out & moves to near the door to the house; 2 sculptors r seen shaking hands with [Funkman] from distance

1.7. [Scene_7] 5 min Garage [Sylvia's Birthday Party]

1.7.1. Buffet Table: [Sylvia] Chairs: [Chap] Decoration: [Suk_Bong] & [Emil]

1.7.1.1. [Max]: starts playing violin [Fiddler on the roof] {Background picks up with the movie score}

1.7.1.1.1. [Jesus] arrives with flower bouquet; kisses [Sylvia] on the cheek

1.8. [Scene_8] 10 min Pot Party + Garage

1.8.1. [Suk_Bong] leaves the [Pot Party] & returns to his hotel room, then realizes he misplaced his cellphone

1.8.1.1. [Suk_Bong] retraces his steps to the [Garage], enters the dark [Garage] & feels his way to the light switch when he hears moaning sound

1.8.1.1.1. [Suk_Bong] peeks from behind the rock; from the dim lighting in the darkness he sees [Sylvia]'s unkempt hair & torn blouse & a man eating her & [Sylvia] is crying 'No, No, No...'

1.9. [Scene_9] 5 min At the Pool

1.9.1. Near empty pool: [Shiva], [Vishnu] & [Brahma] r playing pool

1.9.1.1. Enters 3 sculptors: [Max], [Emil] & [Suk_Bong]

1.9.1.1.1. They look around & as the camera pans, the Trimurti r no longer visible

1.10. [Scene_10] 11 min Garage

1.10.1. 3 sculptors r chiseling away on the rock (about 3 minutes); background music comes on: [Om nama shivaya]

1.10.1.1. After about 3 minutes of [Om nama shivaya], replace with chiseling sound for about 2 minutes followed by

1.10.1.1.1. [V.O.] by [Rickey Vincent] - - - 'I m the medicinal herb. I m the sacred formula, I alone m the sacrificial butter, I m the fire of offering. I m the healing herb. I m the ghee, the Mantra, and the flame, that which burns.' -Bhagavad Gita, IX, 16

1.11. [Scene_11] 10 min Trimurti Erotic Video

1.11.1. Scene not changed

1.11.1.1. [Stephen_Fry] will rewrite the dialog in the [Skype] scene

1.12. [Scene_12] 5 min Supermarket

1.12.1. [Liliana] is seen pushing the cart in between the rows

1.12.1.1. A passerby customer recognizes [Liliana] & greets her - - - [Melanie]: 'Hi Liliana'

1.12.1.1.1. [Liliana]: 'Oh Hi, Melanie, I haven't seen u in a while, have u been out of town?'

1.13. [Scene_13] 8 min Beach Cottage Studio

1.13.1. Quetzal is painting Liliana -- [Grand Odalisque]

1.13.1.1. Liliana stirs from her pose, wraps herself around with white bed sheet & walks over to the refrigerator trailing the long bed sheet behind her like a wedding dress had gone awry, takes out a bottle of Red_Wine, grabs two wine glasses, walks over & sits across from [Quetzal & pours wine into glasses & lifts one glass & drinks from it

1.13.1.1.1. [Liliana]: 'Did u know about the erotic videos Chap & Sylvia make?'

1.14. [Scene_14] 8 min Community Theatre

1.14.1. Everyone from the [Garage] r there either performing or being the audience -- except [Jethro]

1.14.1.1. Jam

1.14.1.1.1. After the performance, everyone leaves the theater & [Jesus] & [Funkman] (the Computer Deskmates) walk home together

1.15. [Scene_15] 4 min Psychic_Parlor

1.15.1. Jesus & Funkman enters the room and sit by the table - - - The Psychic comes out & sits across from them - - - [Psychic]: 'A music man, r u one of the bunch that hangs out at the [Garage_Whorehouse] by the beach?'

1.15.1.1. [Funkman]: 'Yeah, one of my pal didn't show for a gig which is unusual & we r just worried because he is not answering his cell phone, do u feel anything unusual?'

1.15.1.1.1. [Psychic]: 'Unusual? If that's what u call multiple murder, yeah, unusual, that's what I feel, now get out, u filthy bastards'

1.16. [Scene_16] 4 min Outside the Garage

1.16.1. Jesus & Funkman r sitting on the ground outside the [Garage] smoking pot

1.16.1.1. [Funkman]: 'Multiple murders -- when, where, by whom, how & for what?'

1.16.1.1.1. [Jesus]: 'Chap & Sylvia (he looks around if anyone is listening) make [HomeMade_EroticVideo] & sell them; they might have recruited Jethro & that might have leaked & he could b in hot water for that'

1.17. [Scene_17] 4 min Out in the sea

1.17.1. Jesus & Funkman r far out in the water; the sky is gray about to pour

1.17.1.1. [Funkman]: 'Did u really c Liliana with knives, I didn't c her'

1.17.1.1.1. [Jesus]: 'Um, I might have been tripping; I had taken a few magic-mushrooms earlier'

1.18. [Scene_18] 2 min Hospital

1.18.1. [Jethro] is laid in bed with his leg strung up high in a cast (on which surface Jethro drew a banana); [Liliana] had placed banana peels by the stairs before leaving town; Jethro stepped on the banana peels & slid down the stairs & broke his leg - - - The entire [Garage] family r visiting him with flowers & shit -- wait, minus Chap & Sylvia... (They come later after everybody has left & offer Jethro contract for Kamasutra sequels)

1.18.1.1. What happened? - - - [Funkman] & [Jesus] had left their cell phones & keys at the [Garage] desk & [Jesus] wanted to borrow [Chap]'s shower, so both went back to the [Garage] when they got out of the boat & found a note on the kitchen door that says [Jethro is at a hospital], so they go to the hospital

1.18.1.1.1. Who took [Jethro] to hospital? - - - While [Funkman] & [Jesus] went to the [Psychic Parlor], [Quetzal] pulled [Chap] & [Sylvia] aside & told them the state of mind [Liliana] was in the day before at the cottage & 3 of them go check on [Jethro] & found him unconscious (his head had hit the wall & blacked out) & called the ambulance

1.19. [Scene_19] 2 min Beach at night

1.19.1. 3 sculptors celebrate completion of their collaborative project by walking along the sea under the full moon

1.20. Johnny, Don't bother with gory scenes; I got enough minutes...

2. Dribble

2.1. Yeah, Mindmeister, I would put that floating island attached here if I know how -- so far the [Alt] business doesn't work...

2.2. U need to PROGRAM a feature to REATTACH the SEVERED TOPIC (& have edited too much since the detaching of a topic occurred to use the [Undo] feature) - - - For instance, I might want to RELOCATE A SUBTOPIC - - -

2.3. & I should b able to change the THICKNESS of the connecting arrow

3. As shown in the relationship between [Chap] & [Sylvia], when/if there is a right communication between a couple, even [extra marital sex] could prove non matter, which otherwise go as far as murder most of the time (& if not, it causes huge emotional pain in the offended party that rots his/her psyche & causes them to live the remainder of their lives 'twisted') -- that is the 'nucleus' of this script...

3.1. How could it have been different? - - - [Jethro] could have confronted the truth by disclosing his desire to make [Sex Video] with [Sylvia] to [Liliana] -- either for money or for lust is an auxiliary matter... - - - They could have broken up right there then... - - - Y didn't he? - - - Because he didn't think [Liliana] will take it well... - - - Did he, for one minute, think [Liliana] will take it well, when/if she ever finds out -- with 99.99% chance she will have?

3.1.1. If this subject matter is a 'big deal,' then we should chew it over a little further...

3.1.1.1. So, [Jethro] feared [Liliana]'s reaction to his wish to end their vow (unsigned & unspoken in their case) to their journey to 'eternity' together... (With no third party...)

3.1.1.1.1. I should rename this script, 'Fear of Zero'

3.1.1.2. They might have uttered, 'I love u,' which they mutually assume that they share the implied supposition that the utterance includes the above mentioned 'vow'...

4. [Suk_Bong] comes around the rock & lifts the man by the back of his collar & about to blow a punch to his face when the light comes on; [Chap] had been video recording the rape scene from the dark; [Chap] opens the door to the kitchen & invites [Suk_Bong] in

4.1. [Chap] offers [Suk_Bong] a joint; [Suk_Bong] inhales & passes it back to [Chap]... - - - [Chap] explains to [Suk_Bong] that he is making [HomeMade_Erotic_Video] & sells them to friends that its a lucrative gig & people like them that it is a business thing with his wife going 50:50

4.1.1. [Suk_Bong] asks what he pays to the man who participates in the gig & [Chap] says 'One grand'; [Chap] passes the joint & [Suk_Bong] sucks in then passes it back to [Chap] & exits the kitchen

4.1.1.1. When [Suk_Bong] re-emerges in the [Garage], [Sylvia] & [Jesus] r seating on the floor smoking pot & [Suk_Bong] asks if he can borrow a cellphone

4.1.1.1.1. The man with [Batman] mask takes out his CherryPink cellphone & hands it over to [Suk_Bong]; [Suk_Bong] recognizes the cellphone that belongs to [Jesus]

5. [Melanie]: 'Liliana, promise me u will not over-react...'

5.1. [Liliana]: 'Over-react? For what? U saw him with another woman or something?' - - - Melanie stares at Liliana giving her a long pause to prepare for the gravity of the reality...

5.1.1. Melanie shows Liliana the [Erotic_Video] on her cell phone that shows [Jethroe] & [Sylvia] -- in [Kamasutra] [Face_Off] position...

5.1.1.1. [Liliana]: 'Where did u get this?'

5.1.1.1.1. [Melanie]: 'U would have hard time finding someone who does not have a copy of this in this town -- 10 bucks... & it's that woman's husband who is producing the video & there r lots of these; u'r boyfriend makes a grand per video I heard... Maybe u ought to think about doing one with somebody u like, um?

6. Cast (19) + Extras

6.1. [Trimurti]

6.1.1. [Brahma] Willem Dafoe TW [@WillemDafoe]

6.1.1.1. [Vishnu] Vincent Gallo TW [@VincentGallo]

6.1.1.1.1. [Shiva] Theo Theodoridis TW [@Theo_Theodoridi]

6.2. [Sculptors]

6.2.1. [Han Suk Bong] Lee Tae Sung TW [@leetaesung2]

6.2.1.1. [Emil Sinclair] Nav Hir TW [#NavHir]

6.2.1.1.1. [Max Demian] Mansour Taeed TW [#MansourTaeed]

6.3. [Tinkermen]

6.3.1. [Quetzal] Jeffrey Kamberos TW [@JeffreyKamberos]

6.3.1.1. [Jesus] Michael Douglas TW [#MichaelDouglas]

6.3.1.1.1. [Funkman] Teo Vincent IV TW [@TeoVincent4]

6.4. [Garage]

6.4.1. [Chap]: Landlord Hugh Laurie TW [@hughlaurie]

6.4.1.1. [Sylvia]: Wife of Landlord Penélope Cruz TW [@PenelopeCruzOfi]

6.4.1.1.1. [Jethro]: Janitor Johnny Depp TW [#JohnnyDepp]

6.5. [Guest_Stars]

6.5.1. [Stephen Fry]: Landlord's Ex-lover Stephen Fry TW [@stephenfry]

6.5.1.1. [Keith Richards] Keith Richards TW [@officialKeef]

6.5.1.1.1. [V.O.] Rickey Vincent TW [@rickeyvincent]

7. Murders

7.1. [Murder_#1] [Nav Hir] who is possed by [Vincent Gallo] whose son was betrayed by BlackMarket dealer [Willem Dafoe] in [Acrylic Forest] & had caused him to murder the Bulgarian sculptor [Veselin Boshnakov] - - - murders [Lee Tae Sung] who is possessed by [Willem Dafoe]

7.2. [Murder_#2] [Mansour Taeed] IranianAmericanBahai - - - murders [Nav HIr] SaudiBritishAtheist - - - Time has changed: [Demian] kills [Sinclair]

7.3. [Murder_#3] [Johnny Depp] murders [Mansour Taeed] who is possessed by [Theo Theodoridis] - - - as he had murdered [Theo Theodoridis] in [Acrylic Forest]

7.4. [Murder_#4] [Triple_Murder] [Maggie Q] finds out about the sex video between her boyfriend [Johnny Depp] & [Penélope Cruz] orchestrated by the dirty film maker [Hugh Laurie] - - - she murders all 3

8. AccidentalDeaths

8.1. [Boat capsize] [Michael Douglas] & [Teo Vincent IV] escape the murder scene via the ocean then hurricane capsizes their boat

9. The survivors Last_Scene

9.1. [Quetzal] paints [Liliana] [Grand Odalisque] same as the first scene

10. GarageStory

10.1. Cast_Changes

10.1.1. [Tinkermen]

10.1.1.1. [Tinkerman_I] [Quetzal] [Jeffrey_Kamberos] TW [@JeffreyKamberos]

10.1.1.1.1. Prop Mask FB_Page:

10.1.1.2. [Tinkerman_II] [Jesus] [Michael_Douglas] TW [#MichaelDouglas]

10.1.1.2.1. Prop Mask 'Batman'

10.1.1.3. [Tinkerman_III] [Funkman] [Teo_Vincent_IV] TW [@TeoVincent4]

10.1.1.3.1. Prop Punk Hairstyle

10.2. Executive_Producer [Jeff Bezos] TW [@JeffBezos]

10.2.1. Director [Robert De Niro] TW [@ROBERTDENIRO]

10.3. Script_Inheritor [Lee Tae Sung] TW [@leetaesung2]

10.3.1. [29OCT2022SAT1254PST] I want the [Scriptwriter]'s fee paid to [Lee Tae Sung] - - - He doesn't have to do anything for my script - - - I want the money to pay for my funeral - - - I want to b buried next to my dad when I die

10.3.1.1. As for [Johnny Depp], u will let [Jeff Bezos] know that u r volunteering to take care of my script where I leave off (yes I m depressed, but m not toying with suicide idea, so don't throw nothing on my door to wake me up) - - - That is the price of hacking

10.3.1.1.1. As for the script, I am not happy with it; it's nothing more than a dish washer as is... - - - I want to throw in some murder scenes from my other dead scripts ...

10.3.1.2. U may critique via Twitter