First Cut Feedback

1. In one particular shot of the phone, it is unclear what is going on so re-film it to make more sense

2. When editing, add a filter for effect

3. Re-film footage so that the camera doesn't wobble so much

4. Make sure the actor in the thriller appears more scared about what is happening to her by her facial expressions so re-film footage

5. Add a sound effect right at the end of the car boot slamming shut for increased tension

6. Some footage is too long so shorten some of the shots

7. Use copyright free music in the introduction of the clip rather than what we originally have

8. Add opening credits such as the director, cameraman, actors etc

9. Include sinister background music to connote the thriller theme

10. Film when it is slightly darker as we filmed on a bright, sunny day