Thesis
by Matthew Zhang
1. Paragraph 1 Main Idea
1.1. Example Person
1.1.1. Toussaint Louverture
1.2. Commentary for Example Person
1.2.1. Explanation of how Louverture lead a successful rebellion and an example of why this rebellion was necessary
2. Paragraph 2 Main Idea
2.1. Example of Rebellion
2.1.1. American Revolution
2.2. Commentary for Example Rebellion
2.2.1. Example of how the American Revolution was necessary and why it was carried out