Thesis

1. Paragraph 1 Main Idea

1.1. Commentary

1.1.1. How Yuanzhang led a rebellion and why it's necessary to have a rebellion

1.2. Example Person

1.2.1. Yhu Yuanzhang

2. Paragraph 2 Main Idea

2.1. Example of a rebellion

2.1.1. Haitian Revolution

2.2. Commentary on rebellion

2.2.1. Why the Haitian revolution was necessary