Second Cut Teacher Feedback
by Nicole Spurge
1. Getting Better
2. A few shots need to go in to help fill in the gaps
3. At some moments Amee looks like she is pretending to be in a music video rather than appear to be the star.
4. Lip-syncing is mostly excellent
5. The spray can effect needs to be carried out otherwise it will need to be removed
6. Some moments Amee looks at the camera with no movement, meaning that the music video loses some of it's momentum.
7. One of the Lip-synching shots is out of sync.
8. Some of the editing cuts is too quick.
9. One of the whiteboard shots Amee looks at the sun glasses but doesn't put them on. This shot either needs to be cut or removed.
10. One of the dance poses Amee is not fully committing to. This therefore needs to be removed or re shot.
11. The multiple use of locations is good. It doesn't look the artist is just in one place.
12. Likes the use of the colour grenade.
