Tough mudder
by Jose Lopez
1. start with a quote. by Eric thomas
1.1. main idea is what tough mudder does to you and how people it has thought me a little bit more about life
1.2. 3 main topics in my essay.
1.2.1. fears
1.2.1.1. your will
1.2.1.1.1. comradery
2. body will talk about my main idea how it affected me in life and my 3 challanges.
2.1. Main idea is giving the ready of how hard tough mudder is and the will you need to do it
2.1.1. comradery is a bond with people that will grow stronger.
2.1.1.1. the will to move and keep going.....
2.1.1.1.1. the fear you get when you feel that you cant do something, but you break those fears and move forward."face your fears"
3. show your reader that even with all these 3 things pushing you down and up you still made it to the finish line and will keep moving forward. come back even stronger.
3.1. restate your main topic and 3 ideas.
3.1.1. show the reader why comradery is important to you.
3.1.1.1. show how your will can never be broken and you will always move forward
3.1.1.1.1. show that you have no more fears and if you do you will face them and never give up