Feedback from 'The Nameless' first cut
by Abbie Rawlins
1. Differentiate between flashbacks, for instance change the colour between them
2. Need to hear her scream, silent scream don't work, you want a reaction from the audience
3. Need to be further away when covering/capturing her at the end
4. Re-film throwing cable ties- cant tell what they are and need too to understand that shes been tied up
5. Audience confused, need to add something to make more sense
6. Re-film head shots where her heads cut off the top
7. Research into opening credits
8. Some shots are too long
9. Show her actually escaping to make more sense
