Feedback from 'The Nameless' first cut

1. Differentiate between flashbacks, for instance change the colour between them

2. Need to hear her scream, silent scream don't work, you want a reaction from the audience

3. Need to be further away when covering/capturing her at the end

4. Re-film throwing cable ties- cant tell what they are and need too to understand that shes been tied up

5. Audience confused, need to add something to make more sense

6. Re-film head shots where her heads cut off the top

7. Research into opening credits

8. Some shots are too long

9. Show her actually escaping to make more sense